Mouse on the Move
WIP Twine game!
Follow a young mouse as they move out of their family home into the nearby big city.
With several locations to explore, find some roommates and a place to stay!
| Status | In development |
| Platforms | HTML5 |
| Author | sam π |
| Genre | Visual Novel, Adventure |
| Made with | Twine |
| Tags | mouse, Multiple Endings, Singleplayer |

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I love this game :)π€π¦
Wow! How did you make so much in such little time! I am impressed! Keep up the good work this game has a lot of potential!!!
There are so many branching pathways, wow! This game is already so expansive! I adore your illustration style and I love the world of this silly little mouse character, I can't wait to see how it develops!
I really love the art and small animations, it has a really cute style! I also really like the humor in your game, I kept giggling to myself lol. I agree with a previous comment of maybe an inventory system being put in place, since I would end up forgetting what choices I made previously and whether it would make an impact on my later choices. I also did run into a small coding error in the passage "You see a listing reading: Need roommate, small corner in the city. Thanks", so just something to double check in that passage! Other than that I'm excited to see where you go with this :) <3 Mae
I love the art style!!! Itβs very cute and endearing. Maybe you could implement an inventory system, and we can only hold three things in our bag? And then maybe these objects can be helpful later down the road in the story (like when we encounter the alley cat). I canβt wait to see it finished!
I can't wait to see the further development with this!! curious- how long do you think it'll take to reach an ending? I know you've probably put so much work into what you've coded and written so far, but I can't help but wonder if you can cut some of the beginning and just cut right to "you have to move out" and going right into the city.... just a thought!!